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The animation was smooth, and scenes transitioned well, but the dialogue seemed a tad slow and a little forced after the intro. Considering the length of the submission there's not much else to say, but overall a good piece of work for only two weeks of time.

Definitely keep up with practice and I'm sure your cartoons will become viral at some point. Good job, hope to see more of your stuff on the front page in the future.

SuperPhil64 responds:

Hey! First of All thanks for believing my toons have the potential to hit it big, means a lot to me to hear that. And secondly thanks for the feedback, voice acting, writing and pacing have always been some of my weak area's. So i will definitely be working on that in future animations.

Cheers!

Hey I thought this animation was hilarious and had a really good pace; the only thing holding this back honestly is the audio. The voices are a little too quiet and not very well balanced with the music, but other than that it was some seriously great work.

Make Newgrounds great again man, hone in on those skills and the internet could use someone like you.

Radnimation responds:

Hey thanks man, appreciate the feedback. I'm trying to get better at it lol

Honestly, I can't even begin to describe the artistic beauty that went into making this movie. There is too much to be said and so much that can't even be said for the limits of the English language do it no justice. I leave you with my five stars good sir, and hopefully may you find all that is pure and good like how your animation has brought to me. I...I love you...

The animation was pretty good, I just don't like the whole self sprite idea. It kinda brings an un-needed sense of reality into the whole thing, plus the sounds really didn't match the 8-bit theme of the video.

NightmareCinemas responds:

the first part i use the original sound fx from double dragon 2 and this one i used new sound fx to match alittle the reall character , thanks for the info :)

This is the most true thing I have ever seen man, and it is really funny. The animation was stylistic and all the things you said were just words of pure brilliance and art.
And no, not just 99% of the people, 100% my friend.
All my 5 are belong to you.

I get it :D

The art in this was great and I get all of the jokes,(Nice job drawing GLaDOS) just seemed a little bland at times but it was a really well put together(and funny) flash animation. I'll vote it a 5/5.

Hah! That was pretty interesting.

I must say Mr.Oney, you have a knack for creating things that make you look at life in horrible but absolutly HILARIOUS way- and for that I love you.

Totally Worth The Wait.

Mr. Oney. You are a comical artistic MASTER and this was one of the best things I've ever seen. You REALLY know how to please an audience. Thank you for this whole series, I can truly say I would love for you to continue making this series.

Not perfect, but good enough.

The animation and voice acting were a little annoying at first. This was then followed up by the burnt toast talking. THEN the comedy struck and it was all worth whatching.Not to mention the absolute "lol" ending.I guess try to put more effort into NOT making it boring at first, y'know really grab the viewer! Once that has happened you'll get 10 stars and more good ratings.

PeteGrammarman responds:

I feel the mundane-ness of the beginning creates a better build up to the finale. And also, the cartoon is only 1.5 minutes long, you must get bored pretty easy. Thanks for the advice though.

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